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The Straightest Shota
Join Date: Nov 2003
Location: It's a secret to everybody.
Posts: 17,789
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Overcast:
Only spent 348 CP on Active Skills, you have to spend at least 400. You also only spent 245 on Knowledge skills and need to spend at least 300. Your native language (I'm assuming English) is 70 + INT for free. 81 for you. I edited that up to where it should have been. You didn't add your morph bonus to your skills so I did so for you. Mental Speed says it doesn't work with any other augmentations that give you extra actions. I'm guessing they mean extra actions per phase, not turn, but it's something you should probably clarify. Speaking of speed, you have 3 speed as a constant and 4 if you activate kick. You had your speed on the sheet set to 2. You messed up your math slightly on init giving yourself 4 more than you should have. Annnnnd you have 213 unused CP 97 of which must be spent on skills. EDIT: I will wait to do Ellen's until after your revisements so it only has to be looked over/fixed once.
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