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Dracoion: There are a number of things I have to veto in there:
First off, it is coming off as a overpowered.. Six time strength seems a bit excessive (go from benching 200 lbs to 1,200 lbs? No), and sensing demons twenty miles away? Way too far.
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Okay, I may have been slightly sleep deprived when I wrote that. I probably meant something like thirty feet.
If it helps, Jack wouldn't be getting 6x strength too often. Still, I get your point. How about 1.5x, 2x and 3x for Lesser Demon, Blood Summoned and Demonic Hybrids respectively?
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Also, it is not like there is a large supply of demon blood out there. Big Bad Wolf Limited isn't a specialized demon hunting group (hence why the Protectors a better demon killers), and most dedicated demon hunters don't really go for tissue samples after. If you manage to convince me to let you keep the concept, you're supply is going to be rather limited.
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Fair enough. He'd pretty much only have a decent store of Lesser Demon blood and precious few Blood Summoned and Demonic Hybrid samples that he saves for tough mission.
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And you also need better justification. Demon's wouldn't be interested in figuring out how to make humans strong with demon blood when A) They can accomplish the same thing by just getting the human possessed by a demon or sacrificed for a demon,
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Okay, let's see. I can't imagine demons being the most tight-knit bunch. They might work together for a mutual purpose, sure, but maybe someone got greedy and wanted an army of people as strong as demons and they didn't want to trust other demons.
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B) demons who are smart enough to do such experiments would be start enough not to do it with demon blood seeming as it requires...well...demon blood with usually requires dead demons
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Really? A demon can't just grab a knife, cut themselves a little bit and bleed into Jack's mouth?
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C) demons who have managed to this bodies in this world are generally interested in spreading death, destruction, and trying to open the gates, not kidnapping random people to experiment on them for five years.
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Maybe they're trying to open a really big gate and need the support. Like a Greater Demon or an Outcast.
This is all stuff I can edit into Jack's profile, you know.
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So...basically no, I guess. If you tweak it really hard and give me really good reason to be powered by demon blood, we can work with this...but it might be easier to start with a fresh character.
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Well, the biggest problem I can't address is that I don't know a demon
can't mind control people on a large scale. If they can't they'd have to train people as loyal servants from a young age.
But yeah, if you still can't approve Jack I'll see if I can't come up with a new character.