The Dreadful

[MSperoni]

Well, "Muttonchops" DOES start talking back to her on the next page.

My intentions with Kit here was that she just started talking and kept going and didn't stop. Like she would say something and then she would prompt herself to say something else and so on... Like a typical chatterbox.

So, yeah, it's in character for her. One of my plans was to contrast her with the typical stoic Western hero who lets his GUNS DO THE TALKIN' instead of his mouth. Kit talks. Sometimes a lot. I try to give her something interesting or funny to say though, and I don't want her to come off as whiny or annoying.

Originally Posted by Pip Boy

... it almost starts to peel away the fourth wall a bit, and make it seem more like she's talking to the reader than another character.

Actually the original page there WASN'T anyone there. I added that panel on the top afterwards. Originally I kinda wanted it to seem like she was talking to "us" to give it a kind of odd vibe.. But Brian said it was too confusing of a cut from page 2 and so I changed it :P

Anyone ever play Heavenly Sword? Remember the parts where Nariko is talking "at the camera"? It kinda seems surreal. That's kinda what I was attempting originally but I felt Brian was right about it being too much of a weird cut from page 2. I dunno, maybe I should have kept it the way it was after all