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Ara ara!
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I should probably make it clear that the place is not being invaded by people who live in a city. It is being invaded by a city.
Menarker, the concept's fairly solid. I'd suggest dropping the Prelude to Phantasm ability though, since it's a bit outside of the main theme and looks like it'd be problematic to handle. Secondly, no invulnerability while asleep. Ridiculously tough, yes. Invulnerable, no. The backstory's a little troublesome though. One of the basic concepts of this setting was 'no faceless mooks'. There are a lot of people who, when faced with a meddling demigod, would beat it up. This sort of thing is also why there's not much large scale organisation. Inbred, sorry but that character's just not going to work. First off, 'I knows an undefined ammount of teh magicks', well, is not going to happen on account of being a pain in the butt to GM. As the sign-up sheet says, there should be a few specific, well practiced applications of their abilities. Secondly, I've never cared much for generically crazy characters. Finally you don't quite seem to get what the idea is with black magic. Black magic deals with things that should not exist, not things that don't exist. It's forbidden and dangerous because it deals with forces that don't fit properly into the world. Overcast, looks good though I'm worried he might be a little undergunned.
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