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Unread 03-11-2015, 02:23 PM   #1
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I'm still writing my book, as seen below. After eleven years I can now see a clear path to the end of act 1, and the work seems to go faster, but I'm putting everything I have into every part of it and it's so exhausting and scary and lonely.
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Unread 03-11-2015, 02:42 PM   #2
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Amake, a lot of your book reads in an odd tense - It feels more like poetry, which is interesting. What's that about?
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Unread 03-11-2015, 02:57 PM   #3
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Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something. Amake broke the dial off at twelve but is probably at infinity or something.
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Amake, a lot of your book reads in an odd tense - It feels more like poetry, which is interesting. What's that about?
It's about choosing every word with utmost care, to have the story not only enchant and inspire but also sound good.

Thanks for noticing. :3
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Unread 03-11-2015, 03:13 PM   #4
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Aero - Congrats on the weight loss goal! That's something I need to work on myself, I need to drop about 40-50lbs. I'm glad you are going to get another Fox, I know how down you were about the last one.

Mauve - Your characters sound fun! How do the play-by-posts work? NPF RP threads always read as just storytelling and no mechanics, so I'm kind of baffled by the process?

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Unread 03-11-2015, 04:19 PM   #5
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Aero - Congrats on the weight loss goal! That's something I need to work on myself, I need to drop about 40-50lbs. I'm glad you are going to get another Fox, I know how down you were about the last one.
the trick is small changes over a long period and accepting that most of those dietary changes are forever. So make sure its a diet you can live with.
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Unread 03-11-2015, 07:37 PM   #6
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the trick is small changes over a long period and accepting that most of those dietary changes are forever. So make sure its a diet you can live with.
This is what RaiRai finally discovered. She lost 50 pounds over the course of a year, and has kept them off for another two years. She had to change her diet and her physical activity patterns permanently. I'm next, but I lack the will right now. I acknowledge that I lack the will and I know I will find my motivation soon enough. I'm not actively looking for it right now, but I feel like that's okay.
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