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Sent to the cornfield
Join Date: Apr 2004
Location: Las Vegas
Posts: 4,566
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thanks alot Osterbaum! I didn't mean any real disrespect to your nations armed forces, I was just having trouble coming up with funny rhymes. I'm glad you liked it.
those two love poems reminded me that I haven't written one is quite a while, and I don't think I will for some time. but here's something along the same lines. She sits alone, inside her heart that sacred home of loving trust never will I know its embrace for I am in her mind, erased I am that spark of imagination a moments fancy unrefined I am not real, a fantasy the same as she's for me who can know anothers thoughts? and how to pry the doors of love once before with words, too tough but words will never tell enough alone and silent, passions cooled I swore I'd never give it up now this love, but the medium routed towards such painful tedium I'll let her go from in my head I never held her elsewhere in jagged verse I've bled it dry so many tears I've left to cry Last edited by Zoamelgustar; 10-07-2004 at 09:50 AM. |
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