Just Finished Reading

DFA · 12-21-2004, 08:22 PM

Okay so the book, just wow. I've never actually cried from a book but yours did it for me. It was an amazing novel one of the best I've read in a long time. This book really just shows your talents as a writer, there's only so much you can do with a text bubble I really had no idea your talents went this far. So what I loved was by far the characters. Each one was well done and you could love em all. My favorite has got to be Angus though just so damn hilarious. The plot was so well done and the twist at the end I knew there going to be something but never that! The spelling errors didn't really detract from the story. I also have to mention the underlining commentary on society brilliantly executed and so damn correct. I just can't get over how well you pulled this off it had everything I've come to expect from you as a writer and more.

One of the points I need to hammer home is interjecting yourself in the story. This is sorta dangerous cause if you screw it up you screw with the flow of the story. You pulled it off and I was impressed it reminded me of one of my favorite old cartoons, Freakazoid the randomness they'd have that detratced from the actual story made it all the more better and funny.

I do have to say the ending seemed kinda rushed and slightly confusing I had to re-read some paragraphs before getting certain things. All in all it was an amazing read and I can't wait for the sequel!

12-21-2004, 08:22 PM	#1
DFA Good For The Soul Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Michigan Posts: 136	Just Finished Reading Okay so the book, just wow. I've never actually cried from a book but yours did it for me. It was an amazing novel one of the best I've read in a long time. This book really just shows your talents as a writer, there's only so much you can do with a text bubble I really had no idea your talents went this far. So what I loved was by far the characters. Each one was well done and you could love em all. My favorite has got to be Angus though just so damn hilarious. The plot was so well done and the twist at the end I knew there going to be something but never that! The spelling errors didn't really detract from the story. I also have to mention the underlining commentary on society brilliantly executed and so damn correct. I just can't get over how well you pulled this off it had everything I've come to expect from you as a writer and more. One of the points I need to hammer home is interjecting yourself in the story. This is sorta dangerous cause if you screw it up you screw with the flow of the story. You pulled it off and I was impressed it reminded me of one of my favorite old cartoons, Freakazoid the randomness they'd have that detratced from the actual story made it all the more better and funny. I do have to say the ending seemed kinda rushed and slightly confusing I had to re-read some paragraphs before getting certain things. All in all it was an amazing read and I can't wait for the sequel!